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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

My only problem is that the wolf's claws behind the false red's legs are distracting. For a moment I thought she was wearing some kind of bizzaro heels that were mis-matched, due to the text obscuring both.


Also, to a lesser extent there should be the wolf's eye partly visible behind her. And the scythe - like I know they have to be super strong and 'magical' girls to be any sort of a threat to anything but she should have one hand holding the weapon.


Aside from that, it is a wonderful image and I'd be hard pressed to do better!